方言(岩) 发表于 2024-11-12 20:10:30

步韵、依韵、用韵 律诗三首（附原玉）方向明

<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712"><!--    付费贴-->    <div class="preview_article ">            <!---->    <p>七律&middot;归乡（步韵李商隐诗 无题）</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>归心似箭起身难，岁月如刀旧梦残。</p><p>倦客思乡情不尽，孤怀念远泪将干。</p><p>车行远道山川改，目遇近林霜叶寒。</p><p>故里今临曾识路，亲邻迎处细端看。&nbsp;</p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20241112200831front2_0_809888_FvT0swecE_dMIoXxobRNTDAl867B.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="1018" height="1739" data-qf-origin="forum/20241112200831front2_0_809888_FvT0swecE_dMIoXxobRNTDAl867B.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>五律&middot;学诗（依韵贾岛题李凝诗 幽居）</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>苦吟求妙句，觅韵向诗园。</p><p>墨洒窗前案，灯辉月下轩。</p><p>翻书寻李杜，落笔有灵魂。</p><p>但得佳篇就，长歌谢厚言。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>五绝&middot;游子（用韵王勃诗 &nbsp;山中）</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>天涯羁客累，愁看月云飞。</p><p>风冷秋霜夜，孤眠梦里归。</p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20241112195336front2_0_809888_FvBVP7_jo-CwLKGYu8QuoIZI3tkF.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="614" height="818" data-qf-origin="forum/20241112195336front2_0_809888_FvBVP7_jo-CwLKGYu8QuoIZI3tkF.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>附原玉：</p><p>无题（上平十四寒）</p><p>李商隐</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>相见时难别亦难，东风无力百花残。</p><p>春蚕到死丝方尽，蜡炬成灰泪始干。</p><p>晓镜但愁云鬓改，夜吟应觉月光寒。</p><p>蓬山此去无多路，青鸟殷勤为探看。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>题李凝幽居（上平十三元）</p><p>贾岛</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>闲居少邻并，草径入荒园。</p><p>鸟宿池边树，僧敲月下门。</p><p>过桥分野色，移石动云根。</p><p>暂去还来此，幽期不负言。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>山中（上平五微）</p><p>王勃</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>长江悲已滞，万里念将归。</p><p>况属高风晚，山山黄叶飞。</p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20241112200958front2_0_809888_FmQSnCmubzdAn7ZoZVO3zeGXO30K.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="602" height="886" data-qf-origin="forum/20241112200958front2_0_809888_FmQSnCmubzdAn7ZoZVO3zeGXO30K.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p>    <!----></div>            

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