上溪溪韵文学社年会作品：青柴滚酒
<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712"><!-- 付费贴--> <div class="preview_article "> <!----> <p>青柴滚酒</p><p>诗歌/成江银 摄影/王秀康</p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20250117190042front2_0_802797_FrsQCDTfbwm9pxGJliaw4yZ9HoBB.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="1278" height="603" data-qf-origin="forum/20250117190042front2_0_802797_FrsQCDTfbwm9pxGJliaw4yZ9HoBB.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p> </p><p>酒香四溢满庭芳，</p><p>醉意微醺入梦乡。</p><p>玉盏金樽添雅兴，</p><p>黄山琼浆润诗肠。</p><p>杯中日月长留唇，</p><p>盏里乾坤永不忘。</p><p>青柴滚酒传千古，</p><p>人间何处不飘香。</p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20250117190105front2_0_802797_FsW9pxbawN9TE5wW1DZ-UMPhEY7F.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="531" height="526" data-qf-origin="forum/20250117190105front2_0_802797_FsW9pxbawN9TE5wW1DZ-UMPhEY7F.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20250117190105front2_0_802797_FkbuTbHqhYFVZs2cnd0geuW_dC_f.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="1213" height="615" data-qf-origin="forum/20250117190105front2_0_802797_FkbuTbHqhYFVZs2cnd0geuW_dC_f.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20250117190105front2_0_802797_FuI3siqSOW8Df_bOCFnxNyBi9TD7.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="1080" height="1620" data-qf-origin="forum/20250117190105front2_0_802797_FuI3siqSOW8Df_bOCFnxNyBi9TD7.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p> </p> <!----></div> 写首小诗，助兴上溪镇溪韵文学社年会，助力上溪镇企业一一青柴滚酒厂！ 欣赏佳作，超赞！ 青柴滚酒，义乌的“茅台酒” http://pics-app.cnyw.net/static/gifts/11.png送出点赞x1 http://pics-app.cnyw.net/static/gifts/11.png送出点赞x1 这首《青柴滚酒》围绕酒展开，主题突出，用词优美且富有想象力，结构连贯，韵律和谐，营造出浓厚的饮酒氛围，兼具一定的艺术美感与情感表达，容我细细品来：1，主题突出，借描绘青柴滚酒的美妙，营造出惬意、沉醉的意境。从酒香四溢到醉意入梦，再到对酒中蕴含乾坤的感叹，展现出酒给人带来的精神享受，传递出对这种传统饮酒方式的赞美。
2，用词优美且富有想象力。“酒香四溢满庭芳”直白展现酒的香气弥漫，营造出美好氛围；“黄山琼浆润诗肠”将酒比作琼浆，形象地体现出酒对文人创作灵感的激发作用。“杯中日月”“盏里乾坤”以夸张手法，增添了诗作的艺术感染力。
3，整体结构较为连贯，层层递进。先写酒的香气与醉意，接着描述饮酒器具与酒的品质，再深入到酒给人带来的长久回味，最后强调青柴滚酒的流传，逻辑清晰。
4，韵律和谐，读起来朗朗上口，符合诗歌的音韵要求，有助于情感的顺畅表达，增强了诗歌的节奏感与音乐美 。
5，在表现酒文化这一传统主题上，中规中矩，创新性略显不足。意象运用和整体构思没有跳出传统酒诗的常见套路，若能融入独特视角或新颖表达，会更出彩。
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