富安神 发表于 2025-6-8 06:42:39

七绝.老龙头.新韵

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成老师 发表于 2025-6-8 08:09:42

欣赏神兄佳作超赞:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory:

成老师 发表于 2025-6-8 08:10:24

第三句的句号，应改成逗号

成老师 发表于 2025-6-8 08:11:00

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